A Part of Me

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A part of me wants you.

A part of me needs you.

A part of me loves you.

A part of me doesn’t know what to do.

A part of me is confused.

A part of me is excited.

A part of me is happy.

A part of me is searching for you.

A part of me is reaching for you.

A part of me doesn’t want to let go.

You’re everything,

And more.

A part of me has you.

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  • Comment Link Mac McGovern Thursday, 09 March 2017 20:31 posted by Mac McGovern

    Rachel, love your poem, but too much a "part of me. If you wroet somethong like;
    A part of me wants you,
    needs you,
    A part of me.loves you,
    is confused,
    is excited,
    is happy.

    A part of me is searching for you,
    reaching for you.

    A part of me does not want to let go,
    you are everything,
    more,
    a part of me has you.
    This is only a suggestion. It is up to you to decide how your poem reads. I enjoy reading your poetry...ir is wonderful..

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